In reply to Rebecca.

Well, thanks again. And I agree with you about the insufficient tension/suspense in PS. The book’s structure was pretty weird, and shoehorning the plot(s) into it probably meant I didn’t pay as much attention as I should’ve to…well, to important bits. Plus, of course, the title is probably a turn-off for most potential readers. Can’t bring myself to change it, though.

Anyway. I’m going back to what’s worked best for me, plot-wise, in the past–and writing The Secret with no plan whatsoever. Just telling myself a story as I go, and writing whatever seems like the most fun along the way. Doesn’t seem like it should work. But all the planning I felt I had to do for PS took a lot of the fun out of writing it, and slowed me down a good bit too.

Sorry I took so long to approve your comment. No internet since lunch yesterday, y’know. If you use the same email address & want to post again, it’ll auto-approve from now on.

-D

Brave noble reviewer here, and you’re welcome. I really enjoyed Pagan Sex and felt it deserved a review. You gave me a huge smile with the title of this post. Now that I found your blog I can’t wait to settle in and read more of it. Looking forward to your next book.

Your RV broke my phone! That is the way it happened!