Comments on: Wacky Wednesday X (free fiction) https://dhyoung.net/2013/07/31/wacky-wednesday-10/ Scribo, ergo sum. Words and works of DH Young, scribbler at large. Fri, 30 Aug 2013 18:54:35 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.4.2 By: Rebecca https://dhyoung.net/2013/07/31/wacky-wednesday-10/#comment-12659 Fri, 30 Aug 2013 18:54:35 +0000 https://davidhaywoodyoung.com/?p=1597#comment-12659

You’re welcome for the review. You earned it. Keep giving the good stuff and I’ll respond in kind. And I swear that’s not meant as creepy as it sounds.

The Calgon moments in your story were mainly the snow scenes, and they were also the shortest. But something about the way you worded things just made me feel like I was there watching. Again, not as creepy as it sounds. (Holy crap, I’m creepy and never knew it!)

Funny thing about mind-control lasers, I hear they can be tough to calibrate.

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In reply to Rebecca.

Well, I was scared but I looked. That’s a heck of a nice review! Thanks! If I knew how to Calgonify reliably I’d do it every time…’course the answer(s) is/are probably different for different people. Until I get the mind-control lasers working properly, anyway. Stupid things just aren’t reliable yet.

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Hi David, you have a winner with You…Sleigh Me. And if you don’t I sure did. I love it when a story transports me away from where I happen to be and into the setting on the written page. This one sure pulled a Calgon on me and took me away. Funny how that happens with some books/stories more than others. Anyway, I left you a proper review on Amazon. http://smile.amazon.com/review/R3PHY50UY102DS if you’re brave enough BWAHAHAHA!

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In reply to Monica Trujillo-DiChiera.

Glad you liked it!

]]> By: Monica Trujillo-DiChiera https://dhyoung.net/2013/07/31/wacky-wednesday-10/#comment-8959 Wed, 31 Jul 2013 16:24:54 +0000 https://davidhaywoodyoung.com/?p=1597#comment-8959

Fascinating read! It puts you in the subjects shoes, briefly to experience life as it might be for someone on the streets. I like that you can imagine the reality of your choice with this writing.

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